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Episode 19: Party!
Act: 2


Equestria: Ponyville:

--start music: Dark Samus Appears (metroid prime 2)--

Sonic: Hey everypony....hehe..have any of you seen Twilight or any of her friends?

Sonic asked a group of ponies, that of who only gave him grim and mean looks before turning away and ignoring him.

Sonic:.....well...ok...

Sonic said as he passed the ponies he had previously encountered and went on to another group.

Sonic: Hey have any of you seen
Pony1: GO AWAY JERK!

The pony said as she proceeded to toss a milkshake at sonic, the milkshake covered Sonic's fur leaving him sticky and smelling like...well milkshake.

Sonic:....Whats wrong with everyone...pony today?
Tails: I don't know...

Sonic and tails commented as they continued forward. they soon found fluttershy and began walking toward her.

Sonic: oh HEY! Fluttershy! Weve been looking for you and your--
Fluttershy: NO!

Sonic said and fluttershy interrupted.

Sonic:..uhm...excuse me?
Fluttershy: I have had enough of your..your..do whatever you want attitude! I don't ever wanna talk to you ever again!

Fluttershy said as she proceeded to run away to her cottage crying.

--end music--

Tails:......W...What just happened?
Sonic: I don't know...First everyone thinks I attacked equestria and now this? What the flip is going on! Id have thought our friends would have a bit more faith in us!
Twilight: We did!

Sonic and tails said, soon Twilight spoke and the two of them turned around.

Twilight: We had so much faith in you in fact, that we thought you weren't capable of doing wrong.....but now we realize....

Twilight began again giving them an angry look.

Sonic: Listen Twilight I have no idea what your--
Twilight: DON'T PLAY DUMB! You just left Pinkie pies party like....like...

Twilight said as she tried to utter the correct words to use.

--start music: a requiem (Bleach OST)--

--

Flashback: Sugarcube corner:
names in () means talking outside flashback:

(Twilight): like a real jerk...A monster!

Twilight: NO SONIC STOP!

Twilight said as she dashed over toward Scourge as he proceeded to shove food down a ponys throat.

Scourge: Stop what?  She asked for a piece of MY cake just because "there was no more of that kind left!"

Scourge said, using the last sentence to mock the pony.

Rarity: Well that doesn't mean you outright choke the poor filly with food, that's just overdoing it darling
Pinkie pie: YEAH! Nopony wants to be forced to eat things, I mean you coulda just said no!

Rarity and Pinkie Pie commented, Scourge frowned at them and walked to them.

Scourge: Like I give a damn! She should have left me alone!
Rarity: How was she supposed to know you were in such a horrid mood!
Pinkie pie: And no swearing! I always tell shady to stop swearing the last thing I need is for Sonic to start swearing too!

Rarity and Pinkie pie said again and Scourge walked up to Pinkie pie

Scourge: Shady? who Shadow? HAH Like hes gonna stop swearing For useless pink abomination like yourself!
Applejack: Now hold on a minute thats jus plain insultin!
Pinkie pie: Noo, Shady would do it for me! Hes my friend! I like him.....as a matter of fact..I think I--
Scourge: HAH! Shadow doesn't make friends! Hes a F***ing criminal!
Pinkie pie: WATCH IT!!! and that..that isn't true..because, shadow thanked me and, I said I could be Maria for him. and..WE BECAME FRIENDS!
Scourge: pfff, please, Shadow was just trying to soften you up so that one day, when all you little ponies are fast asleep, he could come in and wipe you all out.

Scourge and pinkie pie discussed, and the moment Scourge said the last words he spoke, pinkie pies poofy mane fell to a straight and lifeless one, and pinkie pies confusion turned to sadness as she began to cry.

(Twilight): You shattered poor Pinkie pies heart and on top of that, proceeded to...To DISS the rest of us and make your leave.....

Soon after Scourge had left the area, the mane six attempted to help one another feel better about the recent happenings, and had then decreed to never speak to sonic again. Rainbow dash however had slight trouble processing this, however nonetheless, Her element prevailed for her, she chose her friends over sonic and shunned him along with them.

--Flashback end--

Twilight: And then, you have the NERVE to come back here and...and act like nothing happened!!?

Twilight said through tears, Tails and Sonic felt guilty hearing Twilight's story.

Sonic: But we...we didn't
Tails: Right..we hadn't even shown up here until--
Twilight: If you could just...do me one more favor....Leave equestria....and never come back..

Twilight said as Sonic and Tails flinched backwards.

Sonic: We only came here to fi--
Twilight: GO!

Twilight interrupted as Sonic and Tails flinched again....Sonic and Tails looked to one another sadly and then down

Sonic: If....that's the way you want it....then fine.. cmon buddy...

Sonic said and Tails nodded Sonic raised his arm, called chaos control, and warped away from Twilight. meanwhile, Behind a house, Scourge Stands peering at the scene that just unfolded, he couldnt help but laugh.

Scourge: Looks like Its done, The ponies have lost faith in their blue hero, and its time for me to step in and take control.
???: Not...if I can help it...

--music end--

--start music: bad situation (naruto OST)--

A voice sounded from behind scourge, Scourge looked back to see someone he did not expect to see.

Scourge: Sh--
Shadow: What exactly have you done here....
Scourge: oh me? I was just getting to know the ponies a bit bett--
Shadow: First off, lemme get something out of the way, I know you aren't sonic. The amount of energy being sucked out of that chaos emerald you have there confirms that.
Scourge: grr.... what are you doing here? I thought that you all--
Shadow: had lost touch with the ponies? no, not at all..or at least not me.In the midst of the seven year gap, I would warp here every year to check on pinkie
Scourge:...Why?
Shadow: Im the one who should be asking questions from here on out, and you have a choice...you can answer them willingly, or I can force the answers out of you...
Scourge: I dont get it, When I arrived here the first time these idiots were complaining or something because you guys hadn't been seen for seven years! how is--
Shadow: Pinkie pie is the only one here that knows that I still arrive. I asked her to keep me a secret from her friends, I didnt want any controversy over Mobians Still arriving in Equestria Even though the princess had demanded we don't. However that changed after Pinkie pie Had informed me that Someone from mobius Had attacked Equestria...someone that looked just like sonic...this raised a red flag in my mind but I could never have guessed that it was you who was causing this mess....

Shadow and Scourge discussed, Scourge, now seeing Shadow as a plausible threat to his plans. Scourge folded his arms and looked to shadow

Scourge: Well whaddaya know, Mister badass shadow likes to visit pony world every once in a while, whoda thought huh?
Shadow: Why are you here?

Shadow said, getting directly to the point

Scourge: To have a little fun that's all
Shadow: Why is it that pinkie pie is afraid of me all of a sudden

Shadow said and scourge smirked at him

Scourge: Why do you think?
Shadow: what did you say to her?
Scourge: Thats for me to know, and for you to find out

Scourge said as he began to walk in the direction of the everfree forest

Scourge: (If he tries to pick a fight with me anywhere near civilization, My plans are ruined, I need to lure shadow away from here...)

Scourge thought to himself before he took off as fast as he could, making sure that no ponies could see him

Shadow: WHERE DO YOU THINK YOUR GOING!

Shadow said as he gave chase

--music end--

--

Act 2: End
Sonic takes the Lash of Scourges evil plan.

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:iconcassielovestosing:
cassielovestosing Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Dawn: Well... He's had a change of attitude...
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{love this story!!}
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:iconrosethehedgehog13:
RosetheHedgehog13 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Me: *shouting at everyone* EVERYPONY!!!!! BEFORE THAT WASN'T SONIC!!!!! IT WAS SCOURGE IN SONIC'S FORM!!!! SONIC WOULD NEVER DO ANYTHING TO HURT YOU GUYS!!! YOU GUYS SHOULD KNOW BETTER THAN THAT!!!!!!! THE SONIC YOU WERE TALKING TO RIGHT NOW WAS THE REAL SONIC!!!!!! YOU SHOULD ALL BE ASHAMED YOU IDIOTS!!!!!

Rose: Creator please calm down! D:>

Me: NO!!! NOT UNTIL I GET JUSTICE!!!!!
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TJ0001 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lightning: -puts a hand on your shoulder- im sorry....they cannot hear you...v_v...
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:iconrosethehedgehog13:
RosetheHedgehog13 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Me: *turns from rage to cheerfulness* Of course they can't for I am breaking the forth wall now!

Rose: (What a sudden change in emotions...) =_=''
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TJ0001 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lightning: ._. uhh..ok.?
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FerrumFlos1st Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
If I was Shadow at the moment, I would just grab Scourge's neck and send him hurling over Ponyville.
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Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
THIS IS AWESOME!!
Kat: Aww poor Sonic and Tails, if only the ponies weren't so dumb to not see that Sonic was different. :facepalm: Hehe... Shadow.... visits Pinkie... pfft xD *bursts out laughing* That's just great. OOOOHHH Shadow you best kick his #@%! If Scourge lays one little #$@& finger on him, you gotta let me come back in and woop his %$# and then he'll back like, who the heck are you? and I could be like YOUR DEATH YOU #$%#! Yweah, %#^& gonna go down xD
Pinkie: Omygosh Kat stop swearing!! :O
xD
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:iconsonikku-za-hejjihogg:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Shiiiznit !!! xDDDD
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stargazerdragon Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Scrouge you are so going down....
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